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authorAngel Pons <th3fanbus@gmail.com>2022-10-12 11:38:14 +0200
committerFelix Singer <felixsinger@posteo.net>2022-10-13 10:18:15 +0000
commit57b8fe14a26871d38a5c03c6c76e19d7642a769c (patch)
tree68a89876322e319b23878d922c98a57eb47e483b
parente0adb0bd80a9b742132576f8f91e2b3f951038b6 (diff)
Doc/releases/4.18: Improve several small things
Add a missing period, use "SoC" with lowercase 'o' to refer to a "System on a Chip", fix up the redundant "CRB board" expression (that stands for "Customer Reference Board board"), switch the position of a verb and its adverb ("never was" ---> "was never") to sound more natural, and replace "depreciate" with "deprecate" for semantic correctness. Change-Id: Ic821a9030d4ff32c76765f51f1feb0f5503d4cc0 Signed-off-by: Angel Pons <th3fanbus@gmail.com> Reviewed-on: https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/68330 Reviewed-by: Felix Singer <felixsinger@posteo.net> Tested-by: build bot (Jenkins) <no-reply@coreboot.org>
-rw-r--r--Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md12
1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md b/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md
index 1a4b9c2733..9d3d04e8b0 100644
--- a/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md
+++ b/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ coreboot uses TianoCore interchangeably with EDK II, and whilst the
meaning is generally clear, it's not the payload it uses. Consequentially,
Tianocore has been renamed to EDK II (2).
-The option to use the already depreciated CorebootPayloadPkg has been
+The option to use the already deprecated CorebootPayloadPkg has been
removed.
Recent changes to both coreboot and edk2 means that UefiPayloadPkg
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ seems to work on all hardware. It has been tested on:
CorebootPayloadPkg can still be found [here](https://github.com/MrChromebox/edk2/tree/coreboot_fb).
The recommended option to use is `EDK2_UEFIPAYLOAD_MRCHROMEBOX` as
-`EDK2_UEFIPAYLOAD_OFFICIAL` will no longer work on any SOC.
+`EDK2_UEFIPAYLOAD_OFFICIAL` will no longer work on any SoC.
Plans for Code Deprecation
--------------------------
@@ -41,12 +41,12 @@ Plans for Code Deprecation
### Intel Icelake
Intel Icelake code will be removed with the release 4.19. This consists
-of the Intel Icelake SOC and Intel Icelake RVP mainboard
+of the Intel Icelake SoC and Intel Icelake RVP mainboard.
Intel Icelake is unmaintained. Also, the only user of this platform ever
-was the CRB board. From the looks of it the code never was ready for
-production as only engineering sample CPUIDs are supported. This reduces
-the maintanence overhead for the coreboot project.
+was the Intel CRB (Customer Reference Board). From the looks of it the
+code was never ready for production as only engineering sample CPUIDs are
+supported. This reduces the maintanence overhead for the coreboot project.
### Intel Quark