From 57b8fe14a26871d38a5c03c6c76e19d7642a769c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Angel Pons Date: Wed, 12 Oct 2022 11:38:14 +0200 Subject: Doc/releases/4.18: Improve several small things Add a missing period, use "SoC" with lowercase 'o' to refer to a "System on a Chip", fix up the redundant "CRB board" expression (that stands for "Customer Reference Board board"), switch the position of a verb and its adverb ("never was" ---> "was never") to sound more natural, and replace "depreciate" with "deprecate" for semantic correctness. Change-Id: Ic821a9030d4ff32c76765f51f1feb0f5503d4cc0 Signed-off-by: Angel Pons Reviewed-on: https://review.coreboot.org/c/coreboot/+/68330 Reviewed-by: Felix Singer Tested-by: build bot (Jenkins) --- Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'Documentation') diff --git a/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md b/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md index 1a4b9c2733..9d3d04e8b0 100644 --- a/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md +++ b/Documentation/releases/coreboot-4.18-relnotes.md @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ coreboot uses TianoCore interchangeably with EDK II, and whilst the meaning is generally clear, it's not the payload it uses. Consequentially, Tianocore has been renamed to EDK II (2). -The option to use the already depreciated CorebootPayloadPkg has been +The option to use the already deprecated CorebootPayloadPkg has been removed. Recent changes to both coreboot and edk2 means that UefiPayloadPkg @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ seems to work on all hardware. It has been tested on: CorebootPayloadPkg can still be found [here](https://github.com/MrChromebox/edk2/tree/coreboot_fb). The recommended option to use is `EDK2_UEFIPAYLOAD_MRCHROMEBOX` as -`EDK2_UEFIPAYLOAD_OFFICIAL` will no longer work on any SOC. +`EDK2_UEFIPAYLOAD_OFFICIAL` will no longer work on any SoC. Plans for Code Deprecation -------------------------- @@ -41,12 +41,12 @@ Plans for Code Deprecation ### Intel Icelake Intel Icelake code will be removed with the release 4.19. This consists -of the Intel Icelake SOC and Intel Icelake RVP mainboard +of the Intel Icelake SoC and Intel Icelake RVP mainboard. Intel Icelake is unmaintained. Also, the only user of this platform ever -was the CRB board. From the looks of it the code never was ready for -production as only engineering sample CPUIDs are supported. This reduces -the maintanence overhead for the coreboot project. +was the Intel CRB (Customer Reference Board). From the looks of it the +code was never ready for production as only engineering sample CPUIDs are +supported. This reduces the maintanence overhead for the coreboot project. ### Intel Quark -- cgit v1.2.3